A Metro Ride

Across the seat,
A beautiful sight,
A glowing face
Pink and bright.
Ear to ear grin
Of a girl in love,
Crushing on boy,
Ready to sin.


4 thoughts on “A Metro Ride

  1. Your words are well chosen but they need photographs………. feel free to ‘steal’ any of mine that might fit………. or any of your own, or any of anyone else’s for that matter.

    1. I’ve been thinking that, but then I originally wanted the NaPoWriMo blogposts to be about only words, rhythm, and sound-images. I guess I’d do a photo-poetry challenge for myself sometime, but after I finish this one. 🙂

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